after Cavafy
The Franklin Expedition, 1845-48
When you set out to find your Northwest Passage
and cross to an empty region of the map
with a headlong desire to know what lies beyond,
sailing the thundering ice-fields on the ocean,
feeling her power move you from below;
when all summer the sun’s hypnotic eye
won’t blink, and the season slowly passes, an endless
dream in which you’re forever diving into pools,
fame’s image forever rising up to meet you;
when the fall comes, at last, triumphantly,
and you enter Victoria’s narrow frozen Strait,
and your Terror and Erebus freeze in the crushing floes;
in that long winter night among the steeples
of jagged ice, and the infinite, empty plain of wind and snow,
when the sea refuses to be reborn in spring,
three winters pass without a thaw, and the men,
far from their wives and children, far from God,
are murdering one another over cards;
when blue gums, colic, paralysis of the wrists
come creeping indiscriminately among you;
and you leave the ships, and set out on the ice,
dragging the lifeboats behind, loaded
with mirrors and soap, slippers and clocks,
into the starlit body of the night,
with your terrible desire to know what lies beyond;
then, half-mad, snow blind, even then,
before you kill the ones who’ve drawn the fatal lots,
and take your ghastly communion in the snow,
may you stumble at last upon some band of Inuit
hauling their catch of seal across the ice,
and see how foolish you have been:
forcing your way by will across a land
that can’t be forced, but must be understood,
toward a passage just now breaking up within.
Notes on the Poem
James Pollock's poem "Northwest Passage" contributes to an enduring Canadian literary tradition, and then uses that for a surprisingly different purpose. Let's explore further this selection from Pollock's 2013 Griffin Poetry Prize shortlisted collection Sailing to Babylon. The bulk of the poem delineates details - many well known, but many freshly articulated - of the ill-fated Franklin Expedition. The mysteries and fateful culmination of that expedition have fascinated historians, geographers, scientists, storytellers, artists and more, from John Geiger and Mordecai Richler to Margaret Atwood, Stan Rogers and recently, Ed O'Loughlin in the Giller Prize shortlisted novel Minds of Winter. The poem is framed, however, with a couple of propositional phrases that change the entire context. "When you set out to find" and "may you stumble at last" Those phrases put everything in between - all the intriguing details of what went so tragically wrong, rolled out in steady couplets - in the service of something the exact opposite. Those wretched circumstances are entirely avoidable if you (and yes, "you" are addressed directly at the outset) can just "see how foolish you have been" In the Poetry Daily Critique in 2013, A.E.M. Baumann examined in beautiful and wise detail how Pollock makes use of this historical event to such telling effect, commenting and concluding:Here, in great effect, everything melds into a single energy, a poem that is about ideas that both are fed by and feed ideas, that does not rely on abutment to connect. ... while the historical reality of the Franklin Expedition does function within the ideation of the poem, that reality, that truth, is subordinate to the modality of the poem as a whole, which is not about truth, but about ideas.Pollock's poem cleverly uses history to pointedly illustrate how one can rewrite one's own history before it unfolds.
